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Last post 10-01-2008 10:19 AM by iloveMS. 10 replies.
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03-23-2008 11:49 AM
Parkman5Pack Joined on 03-23-2008 Posts 6
Please review my new site

Sorry I left my web address off my last post 

I have just joined Office Live, and my site is getting alot of views, but I am not generating any leads, if someone would look at my site to see if I have left anything undone, I would be very greatful, my site is www.workinhometeam.com, I have posted this before, but I left my web address off, and I can't find the post anyway,

Thanks,

Eric P.

03-23-2008 1:10 PM In reply to
KathyK Joined on 03-23-2008 Posts 4
Re: Please review my new site

Eric,

FYi, I just tried to pull up your site and all that came up was a blank page.  I thought it was still loading but it showed "Done" on the bottom left of the browser.  I also typed in another web just to make sure it wasn't my system but the other site came up fine.  I did try it a couple of times.

 Kathy K

03-23-2008 1:31 PM In reply to
Bill Mosca Joined on 03-08-2008 San Francisco Bay Area Posts 19
Re: Please review my new site

Eric

 

I got a blank page when I used your link, too.

Bill Mosca, Microsoft Office Access MVP

That'll Do IT.com


03-23-2008 5:56 PM In reply to
Parkman5Pack Joined on 03-23-2008 Posts 6
Re: Please review my new site

Thank you for letting me know my site was not coming up, the problem has been fixed.

Thanks

Eric

03-24-2008 1:57 PM In reply to
Liz - MSFT Joined on 03-19-2008 Posts 181
Re: Please review my new site

Hi Eric,

I took a look at your site and have a couple of thoughts for you from a content perspective. 

First, simplicity is a great thing on the Web and you’ve got that going for you. But my sense is that you spend more time telling people what your business is not, rather than what it is. It’s the kind of approach we get in spam all the time and that could be why people aren’t taking the next step. The other thing I’d say is watch out for spelling errors; I see quite a few of them.

Good luck,

 

Liz

 

 

03-24-2008 9:17 PM In reply to
Parkman5Pack Joined on 03-23-2008 Posts 6
Re: Please review my new site

Thank you, I will undate my site first thing, and get my wife to check my spelling, (I never have been big on it).

Thanks,

Eric

03-24-2008 9:52 PM In reply to
Sister Irene Joined on 02-07-2008 USA Posts 304
Re: Please review my new site

Hello Eric,  I love the family photo.  That might be nice on the home page.  Also, please tell us more right off the bat what kind of home business you are promoting.  Is it online?  Locally based?  Mail order?  Best wishes,

03-25-2008 9:29 AM In reply to
Tracy Joined on 03-20-2008 Posts 2
Re: Please review my new site

Hi Sister Irene,

I love you site!  If I may ask...what program did you use to create this custom site? and/or how were you able to not be forced to use MO live's boring templates?

Thanks,

Tracy

03-25-2008 10:40 AM In reply to
Sister Irene Joined on 02-07-2008 USA Posts 304
Re: Please review my new site

Hi Tracy, Thank you so much,  I am happy that you enjoyed looking at my site.  I made it with MO basics and great tips from folks I met here on the message boards.  Once upon a time, someone asked me for tips about the header and colors.  I'll paste it here for you.  If you have any questions, please ask.

 

There are a couple of things going on with the colors on my site.  Take a look at this page as an example for what I’m going to explain.

 

First, the dark grey/black area surrounding every page is from a pre made color scheme from the site designer.  Since this color issue is related to designing the header and adding the photo, I’ll get back to it later.

 

Next, the dark blue background on this page was created using the color generator at:  http://thexbanners.com/Documents/bgcolor.htm  Note: once you’ve found a color you like, and inserted it with the html module, you can copy and paste the module from your page onto any other page on your site you wish to be the same color.

 

The gold color on the example page is from the page designer.  On this page, the photo and text are inside a two column table using a light blue/grey color fill.  This is inside a one column table using the gold fill.  (For tables, start with a generic table, one column, one row.  Then, add columns and tables as you work.)

 

Beneath that table is a small one.  The inside has text and grey/blue color from the page designer.  It is inside a table with a background photo.  Right click on the table you make, choose properties and choose to insert your own background.  For more about tables see:  http://click-to-score.com/officelivedesigntips.aspx 

 

Below the contact us module is a three column table with a photo background inserted.  (The photo is of the ceiling of our chapel.)  Inside each column is a one column table with a different photo.  And, inside each of those is a one column table with color fill and text.

 

There are many possibilities of what to do with color.  I’ve only explained a little about where I got mine.  I hope this helps.  If you have a specific question, please let me know.

 

Now for the header, photo and color scheme.  First of all, the header layout choices and color schemes work together in a way that actually provides you with many more options than you would think.  To see how it works together, first choose the photo you want as your logo.

 

Size it in your photo manager program to about the size you want. My logo photo is 309x240 pixels.  Upload it into the image gallery.  In site designer, select your logo photo, “next to title” and “large/true size”.  If the size is too big or too small, delete it, go back to your photo program and adjust.  Of course, you are working with a copy of the photo and never the original.

 

In header, type some text.  You can change it later, but for now put some in so that you can watch what happens to it as we go along.

 

Under theme, choose “general, no photo”. 

 

Skip to navigation and choose one of the three arrangements.  It is possible to remove the navigation bars, using Advanced features, going to Properities and unchecking the navigation box.  I chose top navigation, but I don’t actually use it.  The grey line under my title and logo photo is really the navigation bar.  Left navigation leaves a wide blank space on the left side of the page, but it does seem to leave more room for tabs.  On the other hand, too many tabs on the left side can be overwhelming.

 

Go to color and select the first set.  Go back to style and select the first option.  Take a look.  Next go down the list of style options watching how your text and photo are affected.  Don’t bother looking at the symbol for the style options – it does not give you a good idea of what the finished header will look like.  (I’m using the last one on the list.  I guess this is why it took me half the night to do.)  You will notice that different colors from the color scheme are featured with different styles.  So, it is worth while to take the time to look at ALL the combinations.  For me a factor was what color the navigation bar would be since it would be underlining my header.  So when the nav bar turned up orange and purple again and again I didn’t choose those combinations.  When the nav bar turned up grey (with the color set “shadow”), I couldn’t see my text, so I changed the text color to bright green.  Suddenly, I hit on a combination that I really liked.  Go to the next color set and go down the list of styles again.  I’m not going to do the math, but there are MANY choices when you do it this way.

 

09-29-2008 11:45 AM In reply to
thearmorybooks Joined on 09-29-2008 Posts 1
Re: Please review my new site

Dear Parkman,

I checked your site. Nice colors, but not too much input. I read most of your first page, and I'm still a little unclear about what it is you actually do.

Can I suggest you consider adding somethings like:

  • A page of work with samples of what you have already done for other customers.
  • Some articles by those in your specific industry that might help people who view your site, or even articles you yourself write. Since you address "stay at home" folks, maybe home schooling or family related articles might increase your traffic
  • Check your meta tags and see if you can add more industry related words that might drive traffic to your site.
  • Get friends to link their websites to yours.

Since I think you are offering to help people market their business, your marketing style should be over the top. In other words, your website should be the envy of all who see it!  They should look at it and say, hey, I want my website to look that good. 

  • Visit other websites with similar markets to your own. See what they're doing and then try to do it better.
  • Offer special deals on a seperate page - like October - $100 off (or whatever works for you)

Hope this helps a little. Good luck!

10-01-2008 10:19 AM In reply to
iloveMS Joined on 10-01-2008 Posts 1
Re: Please review my new site

 Hey, How can I edit the html of a site?

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