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I have made lots of changes to my site. Thank you all for your advice. The tweeking will continue until I have it perfect. I did add a picture page if anyone is interested in looking!

I don't know if anyone has already mentioned it, but the multiple colors and sizes of fonts on the home page is a little over whelming, you may want to consider toning it down some. 

I changed it. I left a few colors because I think some things need to stand out. Thanks!

You don't have to worry about it then...:)

Hi Drue,

Looks like you sell some fun products. But I think your content could be organized better. Here are a couple suggestions for your site:

• Give a short introduction to your business at the top of your Home page.
• Next, on your Home page, organize your content by creating separate blurbs about your candles, soap and gift baskets and include an example picture of each. All I see now is some random technical information about your candles and soap.
• If you want to feature your Monkey Farts candles on your Home page, that’s cool. But place that content in a separate box or somehow set it off from the rest of the info on the page.
• Create a single order form. Right now it looks like I can order from the Scents tab and from the Order Form tab. This is confusing.  Also, if ordering from the Scents tab, how do I know which color to enter. You don’t list the available colors.
• On the Scentsations tab, I see gift baskets. But I don’t see how you order gift baskets or any description of what’s included in your gift baskets.
• Finally, you say “I can get you any scent you choose –if you have a favorite scent let me know.” How does that work? If I wanted “zebra farts” how would you know what that smells like?

Hope that helps. Good luck.

Faisal,

 I love your site. I have a question. How did you get the "Bookmark" at the end of your page with the links to 'diggs, etc."?

Thank you,

Susan

Hi Mimi,

thanks a lot for the appreciation :)
 
I built the script for the bookmarks from a website - http://www.social-bookmark-script.com/generator.htm

Do you guys like my OL SiteComplete makeover let me know

www.atruemillionlittlepieces.com

Please let me know!!

Thanks Joe

I'm impressed. Much more of a serious feel and an adult look to your website. Great makeover! Good luck with it...

Gypssy

http://gypsyribbons.com

I think that i will be ordering for sure soon as my business picks up. I think i would re-size the picture to be a little smaller.Do you have any cat molds?? Kitty soaps would be awsome!