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08-12-2008 5:12 AM
matt007 Joined on 08-12-2008 Posts 4
Cheltenham website, UK

HI all

Can you give any comments feedback regarding this website I have setup for  my hometown cheltenham. I am hoping to make some money from it with links to late rooms www.cheltenhamgenie.com

Many thanks

Mark

08-12-2008 4:22 PM In reply to
sjr Joined on 02-11-2008 Connecticut Posts 397
Re: Cheltenham website, UK

Hi Mark,

First off, I'd like to know where Cheltenham is.  I know from your subject line that it's in the UK, but I wouldn't have known that from your home page.  Being on the other side of the pond, in New England <g>, I wouldn't know.  Sounds like it might be far away, outside of New England, like New York <g>.

08-13-2008 10:44 AM In reply to
ChrisMoore Joined on 07-23-2008 Virginia, US Posts 144
Re: Cheltenham website, UK

I agree with Sue, it would be good to have on your main page a logo or prominent graphic showing where Cheltenham is.

 

Your site looks nice any tidy but looks a little too much like a search results page for one of those hosted domain pages.  I would try and add some more graphical content to draw potential clients into your site and want to look futher than the textual links you have.  I would soften the colour of the link text too as it does not work well with the theme you have used.

 

There is a little typo on the first section: Check top ten hotel dealsin

 

The image gallery is not working and reports Image is missing for a few frames.  The pictures are different sizes which makes the slideshow disjointed.  I would recommend resizing all of the pictures to a good size and then uploading them again so they are all uniform.

Change your page properties to give more descriptive page titles, this will help with your search engine results too.  Also I could not work out the link between the title on your website 'Cheltenham Regency' and the URL cheltenhamgenie.com. 

Use more graphics to get peoples interest and I think you have the potential for a successful site.

 

Best of luck with your site!

 

Chris

http://www.helpitcrashedagain.com

 

08-14-2008 4:56 AM In reply to
matt007 Joined on 08-12-2008 Posts 4
Re: Cheltenham website, UK

Thanks for your help both and will certainly take on board your suggestions.

Mark

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