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Last post 08-26-2008 7:17 AM by clare. 4 replies.
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08-20-2008 8:32 AM
clare Joined on 07-30-2008 Posts 3
Help! advice needed about my website

Hi

I've designed my website, my first attempt and would love some feedback on it. Quite happy for you to offer suggestions. I think maybe I need better pictures and think it is just missing that extra something but I'm not sure what! Any ideas on how to get it higher in search engines - 3 weeks ago it was quite high but now it seems to be disappearing fast!

 www.roofpaints.co.uk

Thanks Clare

 

 

08-20-2008 11:59 AM In reply to
Doug-MSFT Joined on 03-20-2008 Posts 131
Re: Help! advice needed about my website
Hi Clare,

I think your site might look better if you approached the page layouts a bit differently. Here are a few suggestions.

 

Move your navigation to the left side of the page. On my monitor, your header doesn’t span the top of the page, which makes your pages look unbalanced. This is probably because you have 10 nav headings at the top of the page, many with multiple words. If you move your navigation to the left side of the page, the pages may not extend beyond the header. Another option is to reduce the number of headings (and word count) and then use second level headings like you do on the Products page.

 

Consider a two-column layout. This would enable you to offer more content at the top of your pages, which would especially benefit your Home (About Us) page. You could, for example, insert photos in the right-hand column and text in the left-hand column. Currently you have content centered in a one-column page, and it looks a little lackluster.

 

Use better and BIGGER pictures. Experiment with using larger-size pictures everywhere. Don’t make us press our faces to the screen. And avoid using clip art graphics, which look less professional in my opinion.

 

Review your messaging. Your Home (About Us) page text doesn’t quite carry the punch it might. Lead with a message that quickly lets visitors know what your business is about -- something like: “CK Building Supplies provides professional-grade, acrylic-based paint for roofs, floors and tarmacs. Our paint is made in the UK especially for the UK climate and protects and enhances the look of exterior surfaces.”

 

Finally, do you want to say Home page or About Us page? Most site builders call the Web site landing page the Home page rather than the About Us page. About Us might seem odd or confusing to visitors.

 

Good luck with paint sales!

 

08-21-2008 2:14 AM In reply to
clare Joined on 07-30-2008 Posts 3
Re: Help! advice needed about my website

Great - thanks for that - will have another look and try your suggestions I really appreciate it!

08-21-2008 6:30 AM In reply to
HappyTails Joined on 03-04-2008 NY Posts 51
Re: Help! advice needed about my website

Hi Clare,

I like your site, clean and simple. I have a hard time keeping my site clean because of the amount of content. You have really achieved this. It makes visiting your site a pleasure.

 

I agree with the points already made. I would call the home page home, and create an about us page that lets people know about customer dedication, where you are located etc.

You could add some color samples to the products that come in different colors. I am always trying to find new ways to use products. For example, can I paint my bird bath, rock path, cement walk way? How about bricks? Maybe you could show some samples of combining colors for safety for companies or creativity for business and home owners.

much success,

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Happy Tails
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08-26-2008 7:17 AM In reply to
clare Joined on 07-30-2008 Posts 3
Re: Help! advice needed about my website

thanks for that Happytails - love your site! Will get the colour samples on great idea - will make some adjustments and get peoples advice after that. Really appreciate your input

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